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Thursday October 10 04:22:58 2002
Bold and the Beautiful, the
I only found this on the "latest 10 additions" page, not after a B&B search- maybe it isn't entered yet?

Says
Record number: 7936
Title: Bold & Beautiful
Medium: Soap Opera
Actress: Unknown
Description: Shelia kiddnaps Amber. Amber is bound and gaged.

Allright, took me 2 minutes to find out the actress name is Adrienne Franz.
IMO the description is kind of lacking too-if you just saw the scene and then read it you wouldn't know it was it.

Description: Amber ( Franz) has been abducted by Sheila. We see her being led into a house and seated on a chair. Her hands are tied behind her back with rope, and she is gagged with silver duct tape.
The gag is removed at a point but is later replaced.
Amber frees herself by getting hold of a knife and cut the ropes.
She wears a wine-red blouse that is see-through from below her breasts to her waist, and trousers in the same colour.
Per
pka@mail1.stofanet.dk
Thursday October 10 04:54:49 2002
Re: Bold and the Beautiful, the

> Record number: 7936
> Title: Bold & Beautiful

Sorry just saw it again. Ther's a minor correction of thecorrection:
>
> Description: Amber ( Franz) has been abducted by Sheila.
> We see her being led into a house, hands tied behind her back with rope and gagged with silver duct tape.
She's seated on a chair. Later we see her her ankles have been tied to the legs of the chair.
> The gag is removed at a point but is later replaced.
> Amber frees herself by getting hold of a pair of scissors and cut
> the ropes.
> She wears a wine-red blouse that is see-through from
> below her breasts to her waist, and pants in the same colour.

Per
Thursday October 10 06:54:56 2002
Re: Bold and the Beautiful, the
> I only found this on the "latest 10 additions" page, not
> after a B&B search- maybe it isn't entered yet?
>
> Says
> Record number: 7936
> Title: Bold & Beautiful
> Medium: Soap Opera
> Actress: Unknown
> Description: Shelia kiddnaps Amber. Amber is bound and
> gaged.
>
> Allright, took me 2 minutes to find out the actress name
> is Adrienne Franz.
> IMO the description is kind of lacking too-if you just
> saw the scene and then read it you wouldn't know it was
> it.
>
> Description: Amber ( Franz) has been abducted by Sheila.
> We see her being led into a house and seated on a chair.
> Her hands are tied behind her back with rope, and she is
> gagged with silver duct tape.
> The gag is removed at a point but is later replaced.
> Amber frees herself by getting hold of a knife and cut
> the ropes.
> She wears a wine-red blouse that is see-through from
> below her breasts to her waist, and trousers in the same colour.

Per:

I suspect you entered "Bold and" in the title search field, in which case you won't get a hit for "Bold &". When I searched on only "Beautiful", I got about eight hits.

Anywho, I've updated the first entry and deleted the duplicate.

David
Thursday October 10 06:55:27 2002
Re: Bold and the Beautiful, the
> Per
>
> > Record number: 7936
> > Title: Bold & Beautiful
>
> Sorry just saw it again. Ther's a minor correction of
> thecorrection:
> >
> > Description: Amber ( Franz) has been abducted by
> Sheila.
> > We see her being led into a house, hands tied behind
> her back with rope and gagged with silver duct tape.
> She's seated on a chair. Later we see her her ankles
> have been tied to the legs of the chair.
> > The gag is removed at a point but is later replaced.
> > Amber frees herself by getting hold of a pair of
> scissors and cut
> > the ropes.
> > She wears a wine-red blouse that is see-through from
> > below her breasts to her waist, and pants in the same colour.

Got this 'un, too.

David
Thursday October 10 07:36:16 2002
Re: Bold and the Beautiful, the

> > > Record number: 7936
> > > Title: Bold & Beautiful

Ehh not because I want to be difficult yet again, and maybe I should have pointed it out, but...well its got to be as accurate as we can get it, right?

As I wrote in the correction's correction its a pair of scissors, not a knife she cuts the rops with.

(and you got "led into a house" twice)

No offense intended.
Per
Thursday October 10 11:55:37 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the
> > > Record number: 7936
> > > Title: Bold & Beautiful

"As I wrote in the correction's correction its a pair of scissors, not a knife she cuts the rops with."

Got it, thanx.

"(and you got "led into a house" twice)"

Didn't catch this, so he must've already got it.

Thanx for your assist here.
Jay L
Thursday October 10 14:24:57 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the
OK the "she is led into a house" isn't mentioned twice anymore.
But, what about "she is seated on a chair"??
Don't you guys read the results of your editing, or what?

Hahahaha! You must be kidding!!
Per
pka@mail1.stofanet.dk
Thursday October 10 14:34:11 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the
Description: Description...

Bwahahaha!!!! I can't take it!!
Per
pka@mail1.stofanet.dk
Thursday October 10 14:52:06 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the
"OK the "she is led into a house" isn't mentioned twice anymore. But, what about "she is seated on a chair"??"

Got it,

"Description: Description..."

Got that too, thanx.

"Don't you guys read the results of your editing, or what?"

Appears I don't huh?

"Hahahaha! You must be kidding!!"

Well, honestly just missed it,
however, for purpose of saving face here,
we'll go with the "I was just kidding." ;)
Jay L
Thursday October 10 14:52:25 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the
> Per
> Description: Description...
>
> Bwahahaha!!!! I can't take it!!
>
Per, sorry, my bad. When my computer displayed your second change it seemed to highlight the damsel's legs being bound. I didn't catch the scissors part. Anyway, is this what you want....?

Amber (Franz) has been abducted by Sheila. We see her being led into a house and seated on a chair. Her hands are tied behind her back with rope, and she is gagged with silver duct tape. Later we see her ankles have been tied to the chair legs. The gag is removed at one point but is later replaced. Amber frees herself by getting hold of a pair of scissors and cuts the ropes.<br><BR>She wears a wine-red blouse that is see-through from below her breasts to her waist, and trousers in the same colour.
David
Thursday October 10 15:31:54 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the

> Per
> Description: Description...
>
> Bwahahaha!!!! I can't take it!!
>

Not my bad ... but for the record, I double-check everything I do in the DB. However, being a member of my particular species, occasionally errors do occur ... as they will for any of us.

There's always room for another editor, if you believe the quality of our efforts leaves something to be desired.
Biff
Thursday October 10 15:40:45 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the
Anyway,
> is this what you want....?
>
> Amber (Franz) has been abducted by Sheila. We see her
> being led into a house and seated on a chair. Her hands
> are tied behind her back with rope, and she is gagged
> with silver duct tape. Later we see her ankles have been
> tied to the chair legs. The gag is removed at one point
> but is later replaced. Amber frees herself by getting
> hold of a pair of scissors and cuts the ropes.
>
> She wears a wine-red blouse that is see-through from
> below her breasts to her waist, and trousers in the same colour.

David, at least that is clear, precise, coherent, reasonably written, and understandable. So yes, that's what I want.
Thursday October 10 15:54:06 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the

> There's always room for another editor, if you believe
> the quality of our efforts leaves something to be desired.

OK lets talk in clear language here.

I see a scene. I check it in the DB. It's either missing, or the description is crap.
So, I take the time to try to make an entry, or a better description. I do my best.
Then, when I see the result sucks because the editors doesn't seem to want to even read the result of their seemingly very quick cut-and-paste what do I do?
Advice please! I am not here to insult anyone why should I?
I am here to try to contribute, and make the DB better-after all I use it a lot myself-why not try to give something back?

Honestly David and Jay L if people make the effort the least you could do is take the time to read what they write!
I mean that!!

Per
pka@mail1.stofanet.dk
Thursday October 10 22:44:40 2002
Re: [#7936] Bold and the Beautiful, the
> Honestly David and Jay L if people make the effort the
> least you could do is take the time to read what they write!
I mean that!!

Suggest you go slow my friend.
You're problem here is with me, not David.

You do realise nobody puts more effort into the Data-base than David does huh?
Since you brought up "making the effort"

So if you want to crack-off, then do it to me and leave David out of it, okay?
Jay L

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