| Having the frustrating laptop I do, I accidentally hit submit before I was anywhere near finished.
I was working on the tags list, please add "onscreen_tying, outfit_skirt, restraint_rope" at the end, and space the paragraphs out equally.
Also please change "she is gagged with a big patterned scarf" to "she is OTM gagged with a big patterned scarf", to clarify that it isn't a cleave. And at the end "who remove them for her" to "who remove her gag and blindfold for her".
This is very minor but, depending on whether consistent style is an issue, you may wish to replace the ‘ ' " " punctuation with ' ' " " - I was transporting my work on the description from Microsoft Office which uses a different style of apostrophe and quote marks.
Thanks! [Apologies for trying this correction a few times - the message hasn't been showing up?] |
