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Welcome to the Database Correction page. This page is for letting me or the other editors know of corrections that need to be made. Please read the posting instructions carefully.
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| Thursday June 14 10:48:27 2012 [16029] Corazon Valiente |
| Can you please change the "to allow a conversation with Fernanda to "so that she can talk to Fernanda." It sounds better that way. |
| Emily Prentiss |
| Thursday June 14 10:58:33 2012 Re: [16029] Corazon Valiente |
| Emily Prentiss wrote: > Can you please change the "to allow a conversation > with Fernanda to "so that she can talk to > Fernanda." It sounds better that way. Done |
| Gagster |
| Thursday June 14 20:28:42 2012 Re: [16029] Corazon Valiente |
| Emily Prentiss wrote: > It sounds better that way. I'm not in favor of rewording entries for this reason. If the original is unclear or poor English, that might be a reason. |
| Brian R |
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